Comments : My Tears Express

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    The structure of this is a bit awkward but the message is great and easy to understand. I like a few places in this especially....

    My tears express,
    What my mouth cannot-will not say.
    I'm happy you're back,
    But I'm scared you wont stay.

    That was my favorite part by far.
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    I rly love this poem.
    describes exactly how i'm feeling right now.
    amazing job. 5/5