What do you see?/Last goodbye

by El   Dec 20, 2007


What do you see
When you look at me?

A tall teenager looking like she's strong
Or a broken little girl trying to carry on?

Do you see some one who never ever breaks the rules
Or a depressed looking person who hates coming to school?

Do you notice how I desperately cover up my arm?
Careful not to show that I do self harm

Hoping no one will realize my fear
Not letting anyone get to near

Because yeah I do cut myself
And yes I have ruined my life
I've lost my best friend
Because I made friends with a knife

I can't changed the past
I don't want to carry on
Because everything I had
Everything has all gone

I don't see the point
All I feel is pain
I don't know what to do
I can't take this strain

I just want this to end
I just wan to die
So I'm writing this letter
As a last goodbye

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  • 16 years ago

    by NaomiNeglected

    Not many people can put that much feeling into a poem but you did. I know many people that go through that pain, but that doesn't mean that all hope hase gone. I went through it but now i see that there is more to life. So if u r going through rough times dont give up there is still hope.
    I love what you write and thats you have been able to reach out n put some pain into a poem.
    Your are a great writter keep it up.

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