I love this piece.
Beautiful poem, so descriptive and truly greatly written. I like vivid imagery that you created. Every stanza is fantastic. You did good job with rhymes, too, creating flawless flow from the beginning to the end.
My favorite stanza is:
-Radiant leaves skipping across the wind,
stopping to make love with my hair,
passionately intertwining each blond strand,
with the richly seasoned air.-
Original and very captivating piece.
Keep writing!
5/5