Common Mistake

by Joseph R Hanna   Dec 21, 2007


I took your hand,
and I wept.
My stuttering goodbye.
you shock your head.
a single tear on your face.
you ran!
I tried to follow, but my legs wouldn't move.
faster faster I ran but my legs stayed a ground.
a common mistake
we all partake
letting go what we have
that tuck us a life time
to get.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    I just love the way you express this 'common mistake'. Great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    I like the simplicity and message of this poem. good job! :) keep it up.