This poem was up and down and had a lot of structure problem, I don't think that you wrote this poem with that intent.

I can tell that you release a lot of your poems for your own intent. I can provide with you with a poetry resource.

This poem is...well a lot of my thoughts from my life, it's very true how it pulls one way and then aother. There is always something pulling at your heart..or your soul.

Very good Message. I hope that you continue to write. if you PM I can send you the resources that you can use to make it a whole lot better.