Wow i loved this poem alot, you did an amazing job. I love how you can see a beautiful field of roses but their was one that stuck out and it was your past which was dead, it was well done. :] this was beautiful in its own way but sad also.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Oh wow I just loved this piece! The story you told was beautiful and the topic was unique. I was hooked from beginning to end. Wonderfully done *5/5*

I think this is a really good poem. But I think your word choice could be better. Maybe you could use more descriptive words.. But all in all it was a great write. 5/5