Um...NICE!!! i realy loved this one...it definatly one of my favs. who are you talking about?? but anyways it was once again a great pieces |
by Midnight Sun
This is truly beautiful. My favorite lines are - |
Aw, this almost made me tear up. I loved the last lines in this poem. It was really good. Great job! |
Aw, this almost made me tear up. I loved the last lines in this poem. It was really good. Great job! |
by Sweet lig
Great piece and wonderful! it was simply portraying those deep emotions and it ended well expressed 5/5 |
This was another phenomenal write, there was so much emotion, and you conveyed your message with so much power. The beginning of the poem was so so powerful, completely destroying the person. Adding so much in those simple words/lines to the poem! Keep up the amazing work! |
by Mike Martin
WOW...really good stuff...expression is everywhere......thanks....xoxo |
by My Mistakes
I also like this one very well done 5/5 |