Comments : Finally Tamed

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Um...NICE!!! i realy loved this one...it definatly one of my favs. who are you talking about?? but anyways it was once again a great pieces

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This is truly beautiful. My favorite lines are -
    Rip out a heart
    And lay it to waste
    Just another nameless face? -
    It really de-humanizes the victim here. Great imagry. :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • Aw, this almost made me tear up. I loved the last lines in this poem. It was really good. Great job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • Aw, this almost made me tear up. I loved the last lines in this poem. It was really good. Great job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Great piece and wonderful! it was simply portraying those deep emotions and it ended well expressed 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    This was another phenomenal write, there was so much emotion, and you conveyed your message with so much power. The beginning of the poem was so so powerful, completely destroying the person. Adding so much in those simple words/lines to the poem! Keep up the amazing work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    WOW...really good stuff...expression is everywhere......thanks....xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by My Mistakes

    I also like this one very well done 5/5