by Kristy Dec 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I never saw it coming... |
There are a few spelling errors, so I would go back and correct them.....and this poem, I think it could use some work....I just wasn't feeling it....there wasn't enough emotions...the structure wasn't good...it wasn't that strong....so just work on making it a stronger more heartfelt poem. Take care! |