Liar

by Karen2486   Dec 21, 2007


Someone who lies
Offers someone who cries
A hug
The one who cries smiles
And the one who smiled is happy
The one who lies says bye
The one who once smiled forgets how to smile
And cries for a while
The one who said goodbye
Finds the forgetful one
Whispers to the one who forgot
"I lied"
This caused them to smile.

*Something I wrote in school and I didn't want to lose it cause it's kinda cute I think but yeah...tell me what you think and how I could make it better =3

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A very nice write!
    i was a little confused at first, but i understand it now though.
    it was cute and sweet.
    nice work!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Whitney

    Yeah, i think this is good i enjoyed reading it, but i think it could also be a bit more clear in some area's. Great Job tho! :)
    ~*Whit*~

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