Wow....very well written...and i rele liiked the flow of it.....great job!!! 5/5

This is a good poem. I dont really get what this poem is about but that might just be me. anyway, this is a good poem. 5/5

Kalee

I love it girl! You wrote this one in such a way I could really FEEL the poem instead of reading it.

Very nice poem. i liked this very much. keep the the good work, this was perfect

First, I loved the title. Also the emotion was deep and right to the point which for this peice was great. I loved the brackets around [how expected] it always adds extra something. Overall, a greatly written peice. 5.5

Amber :]]