Without You

by A F   Dec 21, 2007


Date Written: December 16, 2oo7

It feels sad to miss someone so badly;
Especially when both of you have shared an unforgettable relationship;
It's so sad not to feel the presence of that someone;
It burns your heart with such sadness && longing.

With all that burden you're through,
You thought your someone also misses you;
But only to find out that the someone you knew..

..is enjoying the time without you ): </3

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  • 16 years ago

    by Paiger

    Beautiful :) I love how you play with words. You really convey that emotion and make it very relateable :) Great job :)

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Haha! Good poem...I liked it. It was kinda sad. Good flow and good luck

  • 16 years ago

    by jenna grace

    Rightt now;; this is exacctly what i;;m going through.
    you have amazing talennt.
    and you show your feelings in an astonishing method.
    it was short;; but if it was longer i dont think the reader would of been able to get the point you were trying to send.
    i think somethimes we must learn of pain;; to find love.
    5/5<33

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Awww, sis.. it was so so sad. It pained my heart to read it, but I loved it. You have an amazing talent on your hands, keep writing.. okay? I love you, you know that. Good luck with your guys, you know where to find me when you need someone to talk to. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    That brings back memories.. good job..very emotional :]

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