DONT PUT TOO MUCH PRESsure on your self every thing will be alright:D

I really liked this.. I can relate to it a lot.. The poem kind of felt forced.. But it was good. The flow was not perfect.. But i'm not one to care if my poems have flow at all so I think you did great. 5/5

Nice words i love it , keep it up

Short and sweet...

That brings back memories.. good job..very emotional :]

Awww, sis.. it was so so sad. It pained my heart to read it, but I loved it. You have an amazing talent on your hands, keep writing.. okay? I love you, you know that. Good luck with your guys, you know where to find me when you need someone to talk to. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Rightt now;; this is exacctly what i;;m going through.
you have amazing talennt.
and you show your feelings in an astonishing method.
it was short;; but if it was longer i dont think the reader would of been able to get the point you were trying to send.
i think somethimes we must learn of pain;; to find love.
5/5<33

Haha! Good poem...I liked it. It was kinda sad. Good flow and good luck

Beautiful :) I love how you play with words. You really convey that emotion and make it very relateable :) Great job :)

5/5