I rele liike this poem and i liike the flow of it!!!....keep it up!!

I think it is a very good poem I like how you didnt really use non ryhme good job 5/5

". . . just don't work." << doesn't*

Other than that one thing I seen another thing, lol. You said 'just' quite a bit through-out the short poem. A bit too much. It did fit in well and worked out fine - but, it's just there over and over. Maybe another word to replace it?

And, other than those to things, well there wasn't anything. It was flawless with a great flow and amazing emotion.
I loved it, darling.
Keep it up. (:

This is a really good poem. the flow and rhym was perfecty done. great job on the poem. 5/5

Kalee

Hey that kinda soundz lik one of mine.. expressing similar feelings.. i lik it..

Anthony

This poem was amazing. the only thing i found unsatisfiying was it ended with too much a bang work of feeling. it's a really great peace of writing tho. good job. and thank u for the comment u gave me. i always love to get feedback on my poems.

Love the flow of this poem...i totally understand and feel your pain.

I liked this one i can totally relate. beutifully written altho so of the words where too simply (i feel) but all in all a good read.

This is really great...I feel like this lots of times too...love it. <3

Wow, this is so good. I can actually feel the emotion in this poem. Seems like you're really hurt. Great job! 5/5

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