That was a very good poem.I know how it feels to love someone but not be able to have that someone.

Wow it the truth i have the exact fellings for tis guy n my school and I LOVe HIM and he is just the world to me ad i finally told him i i felt and he said he felt the same way but he wouldnt date me he just dates all these girl the reason he wont date me cuz he dont whant to hurt our friend ship oh read my pome about him its called My Fear

Wow.. this poem, is just amazing,, the flow was a bit off but the explression made it work.. it made me teary eyed.. i love it

Very welll written poem I know how you feel. That is the way my ex. is and I still want to be with him but he has that other girl in the way that is making him happier than I ever could.. Very well 5/5