"Now I'm left with nothing but the police at my door,
telling me that you have gone, your not with us anymore.
I cannot remember what it was like with you that final day,
before we said goodbye, before I sent you on your way."

One change where it says "your not with us anymore."
It should be you're. :]
Just thought I'd let you know, darling.
I loved it, the flow was amazing.
Ilyyyyyyyyy.
Take care, Natz babe.

Thats was amazing
wow...it was so well-written
i could almost taste the emotion
it was remarkable
great work Natasha
hope to read more stuff of yurs soon
Takecare
Lisa

That was so sad but it was so great and well expressed...loved it a lot...keep it up:)..5/5..