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by EmoGirl2012   Dec 22, 2007


Sitting here trying to remember that smile
and when it finally comes to mind
the tears fall down like rain
I just need you so badly
Remembering you isn't
supposed to hurt this bad.
Why don't you try to
remember someone you love
and see how it treats you?
Maybe if you did, you would
realize how hard it is to
deal with having to think that
this one loves you
when they really don't.
Its not supposed to hurt this bad.

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  • 16 years ago

    by EmoGirl2012

    Thanks guys

  • 16 years ago

    by checkerboard

    I really like your poem. you could title it "memeries". i would rate your poem at a 5 b/c it sound got and it does suck to love someone but they don't love you back. but u just have ot hold on and think that there is other guys out there.

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Nice poem.For the title what about something simple like "remembering you"? I thought you used "remember" too many times but its alright.I would give this poem a 4/5.Maybe try to make it more origanal.I've heard alot of the lines in other poems.
    Keep writing,
    Rado

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