Comments : What if I told you

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    Another one of those poems that makes me wish you could vote in between. A 4.5 in my book. Good job=D

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Awwwwww this is touchy.. Sound so gentle and seem shyness love into getting there.. I love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by gabriella

    I love this poem lol if yout told me all that i woudl probalby love you so ehre s to the lucky gir l you wrote this for

  • 16 years ago

    by fakesmile

    You know... therez alwayz that question...
    "what if?" dat makez us wonder if itz worth takin a risk with no assurance that thingz will ever be the same if u told sum1 u like them and not sure if they like u back.. i luv diz poem! luv it! luv it! luv it!

  • 16 years ago

    by fakesmile

    You know... therez alwayz that question...
    "what if?" dat makez us wonder if itz worth takin a risk with no assurance that thingz will ever be the same if u told sum1 u like them and not sure if they like u back.. i luv diz poem! luv it! luv it! luv it!

  • 16 years ago

    by thegirltheydontsee

    Sp in line 8,
    again its a good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by thegirltheydontsee

    This is a good poem and i have a few sugg. but send me a message that u got this cuz my sugg are long..not really juat long to explain..
    ellii

  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Awwww really good poem
    nice job writin down your feelings