The Weakness of Guilt

Months of guilt,
Of what I did,
--this made my heart...drop
i can relate to your words so much

Thats what my weakness is,
I cant let it go.
--so powerful, and incredibly true,
great great ending
5/5

Great poem I enjoyed this one. I don't know what u did that u have this guilt but guilt can eat u up from inside out. So whatever it is I would work on forgiving yourself and I believe write out the problem is an excellent start. If u need to talk to someone I am here for u just message me.

"Was it all just a nightmare of chaos,"
i think at the end of this sentence you should have a question mark instead of a comma. :]
It was a good poem .. but i think you should make it longer.. and the flow was a bit rocky..
also like temps said dont forget to add your apostrophes[sp?]
Anyway
Nice poem
4/5

Keep Smiling
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