by Cale Dec 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Alot of people think that liking her is just wasting my time. |
Okay first off, I think maybe in one of your next poems you should try to use another type of structure for your poem. The two line stanzas are kind of boring, no offence. Other than that the poem was good. |
by jane
Wow...just great |
by Stinapoo1991
Wow I like this, great job |
by Hollywood
I liked this one...but dont sit around waiting for some one who might not want you. she might be so beautiful but you should move on or make your dreams come true dont sit waiting for a mircale{sorry i think i spelt that wrong}to happen cause you might be waiting on something that cannot happen or youll miss the best things in life but great job..... |
by homebound
Hey this one is really good too! gosh...it just gets better haha! awesome job! |