Woah.. this is truly amazing! So sweet and you can tell that it is written from the heart. She is such a lucky gal to have someone that loves her like this. If only every guy could write poems like this *sigh* haha!!!! wonderful word choice and wonderful flow.. wonderful rhyming.. wonderful.. okay, so its basically amazing!! haha keep up the freaking awesome work! :D

"her body is warm and cuddle"

I think warm and cuddly, sounds better. Just for the flow of the poem.

"her smile is brighter than the sun
she is beautiful but im not done"

just putting the dash in I'm will improve that but i really like this line. very sweet.

It is true how you try and tell the ones you love how great they are and sometimes they cannot believe you.
This poem was so sweet and meaningful.
Hope you have found your true love.

^_^

great poem

Awwwww u discribed her so nicely great poem