by Internal Hatred Dec 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The rage builds up inside, |
by Sarah
Wow! Powerful piece you written here. Great imagery, awe-inspiring write as well. The words beat me deep. The last stanza was beyond belief. Good JoB! |
by william
Your not alone |
by she
5/5-sad,but alot of feeling in a short poem, really, really good |
by StandStill
Wow. a wave of emotion is so powerful from this piece.....would love to know where it came from.....beautiful. |
by damont
I like this poem keep writing. sounds very emotional. and yet it seems you being taken over. its short but sweet. what caused this monster to come out i wonder? |