Comments : I miss

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveHIMonly

    :) this was meaningful.
    whoever it is that your thinkin about, is a lucky kid. and if this kid let you go, then what a stupid fool.
    great poem.
    i can relate. :))
    loved it.
    keep up the AWESOME work.

    ---Tay

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Aw. I know exactly how you feel. Very relateable poem.

    Although in this line

    "I miss......the days when we could talk for hours about anythign..."

    you mispelled, it should be "anything"
    just thought you should know that. good write.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    Heya!
    I thought this poem was really heartfelt. I can totally relate, the emotion was genuine, and the words true. I really hope you're doing okay! The person you wrote this for, is so lucky to have you care about them this much!
    Take care!