I fell like i was left hanging maybe add how yoru evening dwindled down. but i lveo the poem its genuine and cute. i lveo yoru use of words it was rally good

Wow. this is so genuinely sweet. really really. i loved it. idk, it was just very peaceful. it brings the reader some inner peace, if only for a moment. thanks for giving me that peace. :)

OMG!!! i LOVED it!!!! it was soooo cute!!! more than the last one i read. awesome job!!! :-D

This is really good