Comments : My masters

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    I really like this poem, so deep, so meaningful! i luv it! keep up the good work! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    I really like this poem, so deep, so meaningful! i luv it! keep up the good work! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very intense, filled with raw, overwhelming emotions. I think that you should add at least one more line, or change the "I don't have a choice" because it really seem unfinished.
    All in all, good write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crippled Wing

    Wow! that's all I can say!!!! It's VERY good!!! So many words I can relate to!!!! 5/5