This is written in tears
for i love her so dear
whenever she is far
i just wish she was near.
i can't really explain it
why i love her so much
but without her in my life
i wouldn't amount to much.
she's the oxygen in my air
she's the beat of my heart
she's everything that i love
but i'm just not very smart.
i haven't been cherishing
her love very much
it seems like our souls
are losing their touch.
but she can't slip away
i love her too much.
she's the apple of my eye
the sun in my sky.
the moon in my night
and the star that shines bright.
she's my reason to live
and my reason to love
whenever a girl's on my mind
it's her i'm thinking of.
i just can't let her leave
i need her around
she has to help me
when i fall to the ground.
i love her so deeply
i just hope some day
she'll know.
this love is never fading
it just only grows....
WOW.
i thought this was completely amazing.
personally, i feel the same way about a boy.
thats why i can relate to this so much.
this is fantastic and i loved it.
good imagery and word choice.
keep up the good work. :)
<333.
--Tay