Thats so true.
:)
liked it heaps
and the flow

I love the message that you are sending in this poem. i thought the poem itself was amazing. i would like to make a couple of suggestion, though.

"marely ones opinion"
**should read "merely ones opinion"

**i thought the last few lines threw off the rhyme and rythym of the poem. you may want to consider revising, you may not. its your poem, your decision.

this was a great poem with a fantastic meaning, wonderful job with this. 5*5
Kimberly