This showed tons of emotion.
this was a fantastic poem.
i loved it.
you showed a lot of good word choice.
keep up the good work. :)
your a great poet and keep those emotions in your poems.

--Tay

Beautiful poem but a few things....

In line 2 - were is "where"?

Line 9 - Begin the line with Not?

Just thought I would try to help a bit but I loved the poem ;)