Aww my gosh this was amazing! :)
i loved it and i can relate to every single word.
GOOD JOB.!
im very impressed.
good imagery and word choice.
keep it up and let it out

---Tay

5/5

I thought the message was really sweet in itself, but it was kind of wordy. the flow was pretty good though. good job, 4*5
Kimberly

Awwz very cute!!!! lol and it was very well written....and i can relate to the feelings in it!! 5/5

Very well written... i get every word of it... its one of the best poems that i have read in a long time keep up the good work you are really good and i mean every word of the poem is well thought out i can tell.5\5

Aww I love this pome my I like happy love poems my fave part was when you said''Sometimes when I sit,
And stare at the stars above,
My thoughts turn to you,
The one that I love." that was so sweet and romantic...I love that part and when you said that she unlocks the key to your heart!!so sweet...love always...xoxo...=)

Awww!! I love the flow and the way it was written 5/5 :)

This is really good :) and thank you for the comments

Sweet love poem, written in a good way. It has great, flawless flow from the beginning to the end. The rhymes are too typical for my personal taste, but that didn't ruin impression on this piece. Very emotional,, touching poem.

Oh my gosh that is so sweet! wow dude you are preety good... i hope she finds out some day but hey dont worry bout it she'll know

Aww adorable poem i love how you described what you love about her it made me smile : ) you obviously really care about this girl ! anyway 5/5 <33

OMG i really loved it its a really great poem and i can relate to every word great job!!!!!!!!

Amazing work
keep it up!