1st comment:)

and wow, this one makes me sad. It makes me want to help you fight for it. But sometimes you have to do it on your own.
Awesome poem.
i LOVE the imagery you use while espressing what you feel with methaphors and similies.
:)
hang in there..
im here for you.

keep your head up.
<3

---Ta

Greatly written poem. I like the topic that you picked, it is very original. Whole poem contains very vivid imagery and your descriptions make me see everything you wrote about which is amazing.
The flow of the poem is really good, you did great job with rhymes.
Truly fantastic work!

This piece portrayed the life of your gladiator so well that i could almost imagine it happening in my mind 5/5 the imagery and amazing use of words was so very intense..
i love this poem, it opens up new perspectives =)

xD Happy Thoughts xD
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Great Poem

Mysterious- The title comes in last
It gave me a good sense of scenes and the rhyhming has been pretty good
5/5