by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop Dec 23, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The trumpets sounded, |
by SweetSuicide
Simlpy love it yea thanks for the help .. |
by Mollie
Nice detail I like how it walked you through the whole scene... nice work. loved it, keep it up. |
by Crystal Gaze
An Excellent write. |
by Lecrissa
Oh wow, Great story.. |
I like it a lot... Interesting and very unique poem. The story behind it is great and the rhythm that follows emotions through the whole piece is exciting. The twist in the end is very sad and tragic yet very effective. |