Comments : Could you???

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I would kill myself, but I like life to much and hate pain alot. lol. Good poem.
    Great write from Poetry Knight

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    I liked this poem. It made me think that this person can't really stand their selfs and your asking could they cope if you do this and that. I don't know but i do like this idea you have here, its great.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 15 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Everything could be changed by time

    nice & WARM

  • 14 years ago

    by Siham

    Nicely written , like it sooo much
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    Very deep. I loved this poem
    It made me think of myself
    Good job
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