First, id like to say that i really liked this poem. i understood the message behind it, and i thought it was great.
if you dont mind id like to make some suggestions in the poem.

"Dances threw the melodies" should read "Dances through the melodies"

the last couple of stanzas threw off the rhyming scheme, they were shorter than the first two. it throws the reader off a little bit.

the second to last stanza read
"And she who has no faultiness
cannot be real
Most who act with perfection
end up to steal"

i would suggest something like
"And she who has no faultiness
must not in fact be real
those who act with perfection
shall end up to steal"
or something to that effect.

i hope that you dont get mad for critiquing your poem. overall i thought it was good, i give it a 5*5
Kimberly

Omg,
this is amazing!