Wow i love it!....and i can totally relate to it! my favorit part of it was......

As a matter of fact, sometimes it is better to let go,
So from this point on I am putting aside my happiness...
The pain is immense but I will never let you see me cry;

it shows that even tho u want to be happy with him u cant and u dont want him to c u cry! it shows great stregth! 5/5

Very nicely written.

This is my teenage love story, call it a tragedy even..
It will forever remain with me, which is why I let go.

i loved that part. it was a really nice ending and the flow was great

5/5

This is a great poem and i can relate.
this poem for me was an attention grabber.
i simply had to read all of it after reading the first line :]
the emotion was very well captured
and i liked the way you wrote this one too. :]
amazing write. 5/5.

This is amazing, though sad and tragic. . Y_Y but nice, well written. . 5/5

Keep
Safe

~KEnny~

Omg i've been in a situation like this before and i know how it is...u dont want to let him go but you kno u have to!!! if u ever want to be truly happy!!! keep it up!

<3 i love you silly

When I read the first sentence, I knew I was going to be hooked on this poem. As I was reading, it felt as if it was being spoken to someone yet it was so poetic and flowed flawlessly. I loved the bluntness in your second stanza.

The way you took such a heatrbreaking topic of breaking up and fill it with a hint of hope was just beautiful and I admired that.

"In my heart I know whatever happens is for the best;"
^so true!

You are one of my fave poets on this site and I just want to let you know you have a great deal of talent. Take Care!

*5/5*