Wow...
This is amazing and breathtakingly beautiful yet filled with overwhelming sadness... Whole poem is original and filled with emotions. Truly deep piece, interesting and intense from the beginning to the end. Every stanza is greatly written.
I can't pick my favorite part, whole piece is simply amazing.
Keep writing!

Bravo! I love all your work very much, always a great read. Very excellent, the sky that cries, lovely just lovely! Great job! 5/5