Could It Be any Harder

I really like your writing style- truly refreshing and creative. I could feel everything you described in this piece. Truly powerful poem, portrayed with effective uniqueness. The expressed emotions are very intense and touching.

Wow! Absolutely amazing poem, with so good choice of words and powerful, remarkable atmosphere. I love idea of whole piece, it is totally unique and tones of this poem kept my attention in every line. Well done, I really like this poem, very interesting and original.

Amazing.
I felt the emotion, wonderful job. I loved it

I sometimes feel this way at work. This is my favorite line: 'They're all different.
and roaming in desperation;
rushing softly from despair.'