okay. I truly loved it. you evolved tragic poetry.
Aken Sol

but only if we dont get caught in the depression that follows losing all
Aken Sol

hey how are ya? your a really good writter! i really like your poems. how long have you been writting for? could you cheak out my poems if you get time? well c-ya later!! great job ay..

*hint* i intended this poem to be about the Tower of Babel, ya know the Biblical story? yeh

Right.... i knew that....
Aken Sol