by Avan Ahmad
Aww nice poem. the worst feeling is when I miss someone but its the best feeling when you see them and hold them. I enjoyed reading it try to add more what else do you miss. dast xosh |
by Mousie
Aww so cute, god do i know the feeling! loved it yet again! |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Sweet lips, and itll be perfect. its so sweet. and something anyone can relate to. i loved this poem. youre such a sweet guy goran. |
by Sweet lig
Hmm i can see myself w/this poem.. coz there are alot of times i cant sleep and same thoughts.. ilove this piece i was enjoyed alot and i guess it really inspire me! wonderful work GORAN..keep it up5/5 |
I like this piece. The emotions in it are expressed in a good way and I can relate to this poem in a way. Simplicity of this poem points out the feelings even more. The atmosphere that you created is captivating and whole piece is greatly written. It sounds truly sincere, like it's straight from the heart, filled with raw emotions. |
by xxxStarSxxx
I love this poem. it reminds me of my boyfriend when he's gone and I miss him. You put so much emotion into your poems. I love it. 5/5 |
by JustKristina
Great poem. It is simple and sweet and to the point. I love the way that you used the Stars and Moon. wonderful poem! keep it up! :D |
This poem is written beautifully. I loved it. You did a wonderful job writing it. keep up the great work. |
This poem reflects very well a passion of timeless and astronomical proportion |
This poem was very different, i liked it very much.. i thik it felt a lil forced tho n u need sum spellin corrections.. but it was a nice poem |
by ABake
Aww. I think this is beautiful. Although it is a little short for my preference of writing but still had well expressed emotions. I can relate to what you feel :]] |
Wow it feels like forever since I've |
by Brittany C
Great poem :) I feel that way about my guy. It had a good flow for the most part. The word choice was great. It can also be easy to relate to. 5/5 |
by Sourav
So simply expressed the deepest feelings of heart. Nice flow and well written! |
by Crystal Gaze
Goran, |
U r really a fantastic poet...I do admire the way u wrote that poem..it was so simple ,sad but at the same time it was so beautiful...good job...keep it up |