by Aken Sol
i like it. Your take on your own life is unique but i would catagorize it under poems about life. But even though your life is lucky like so, it doesnt mean others are as fortunate as you. Keep writing |
by Sean Allen
Oh Breyanna, I guess it was more of a personal message than a widespread generalization. I don't know if you'll ever read this response... but in any case, this poem isn't meant to insult people who are writing about experiences or pain, its more of a self-criticism... i think |
by Aken Sol
lol. Sean doesnt seem like the type to insult others but im blad that he gave an explaination |
by Aken Sol
maybe it was intended or maybe not, but the flow is kind of.... sudden. Even though it doesnt rhyme, this one doesnt flow. Maybe it was intentionally angst i dont know. It's unique nonetheless. |