Very beautiful and heartfelt...

"Until we meet again,
You'll live in my heart!
I'll love you you forever,
My fallen angel! "

loved this stanza...

U hv execllently penned ur feelings... i cud feel the emotion of ur poem...

really good..

It had a lot of emotion which I like. It did not flow for me though. You used a good variety, except you used the word "yearn" alot. I have noticed that you use that alot which makes it a little more boring to read. I understand that you are using that word because it is a strong word but you should try replacing it sometimes with other words such as "desire" which has the same meaning and strength. I hope you use this constructivly as I do look forward to seeing what you write in the future. 4/5

I love the feelings you express in this poem, it's something everyone can relate to. the flow is pretty good and I like the way you organized your stanzas. especially the first two stanzas: eyecatching ;) 5/5