The Final Conclusion

by Shinobi   Dec 24, 2007


Memories, oh those memories shall never be forgotten
Those sweet secrets told with eternal confidentiality
All those times our friendship had nothing rotten
Gentle hugs and kisses given without any brutality

There was a time when your head was laying on me
Your sweet smile and glowing eyes didn't let me go
At that magical moment you let me see
My life's journey, the last piece I had to know

Mind and heart where wondering about you ever since
I longed for the only girl who is capable of making me cry
Emotions showed me that there is no one to convince
Mind told me that it's settled, I must try

So it began, my journey for my long lust love
Our friendship was enjoyable all the way through
But there had to be a devil from above
A thing showing me that it could never be true

So you pushed me from you
My behavior seemed to affect your emotions
There was only one thing I could do
To change and fit to the right proportion

Losing you would feel as I am split to two
My state would come to a deathly seclusion
I would change to the opposite of the me you knew
Then, I hope you would come to the final conclusion

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  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Damn... the message or the story is really great... truly sentimental and really heart-grabbing...
    i like this line "I longed for the only girl who is capable of making me cry"
    me too! i long for her too... great poem yo! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    This was really good i loved your site of emtion and words in this piece keepit up

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    The first line i think it was true coz i believe memories never forgotten no matter what.. but though u seems made a great by this.. all the words was powerful and very creative! the flow was not bad.. even the emotions. nice one 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Amazing write. i love this poem. it's so. .deep. it's full of emoiton and you're an amazing poet. :] i liked your words choice and vocabulary. this poem was an attention grabber for me from beginning to end. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Great poem man, freeverse, not much rythm a little bit of rhyme. girls suck man... my xgf just cheated on me then dumped me and it made me realize she's just not worth it. girls aren't worth it, most of them are b*****. bro's before h***. that's my motto. keep up the good work bud.