Great poem man, freeverse, not much rythm a little bit of rhyme. girls suck man... my xgf just cheated on me then dumped me and it made me realize she's just not worth it. girls aren't worth it, most of them are b*****. bro's before h***. that's my motto. keep up the good work bud.

Amazing write. i love this poem. it's so. .deep. it's full of emoiton and you're an amazing poet. :] i liked your words choice and vocabulary. this poem was an attention grabber for me from beginning to end. :] 5/5.

The first line i think it was true coz i believe memories never forgotten no matter what.. but though u seems made a great by this.. all the words was powerful and very creative! the flow was not bad.. even the emotions. nice one 5/5

This was really good i loved your site of emtion and words in this piece keepit up

Damn... the message or the story is really great... truly sentimental and really heart-grabbing...
i like this line "I longed for the only girl who is capable of making me cry"
me too! i long for her too... great poem yo! =]