by aDORKable x3 Dec 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Verse 1: |
by MyEscape
Overall, I really liked this piece. I think a couple of parts needed a little tweaking like the last line of your chorus. Maybe like the sentence itself was too long. I liked the idea of the piece though, and the things you said in it. Good job! |