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I feel the same about a friend of mine..great poem! |
Awwww, that's so adorable!!! I really like this, I neva knew my best friend fell in love with me and we continue to be friends for good. This is actually Pefect for him haha. |
by Brian Yazzie
"speachless" |
by Alvaro
Hey, thats sweet a write. its hard to find those people who make you feel that way, =] i loved it |
by hadia
Aww, thats cuute. |
This poem is really nice. It has such a beautiful meaning behind it. Well done! 5/5 |
by bryan agpawa
.,. it a good work.,., you it happens to me once,., |
I HATE falling for my friends, its sumthin that happens all too much, ugh, good poem tho |
Whoa we are so in the same situation... |
by CWG
Very sweet touching poem and very well written. 5/5 |
by halie
Lol wow talk about way to much in common!! |
This poem is great, but a bit surface. Your topic is a good one, and i am sure it is filled with tons of emotion, as a reader I want to see that emotion more! Often times figurative language, similes, metaphors, and taking advantage of the connotation of words can really bring the poem up a level. Great poem, wonderful start. |