Comments : THERE SHE IS

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    Oh my gosh gurl luv that story its sad and sweet i just luv it beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Independent

    Gurl dat poem/story was hott..i can def feel where u comming from. i love da name i liek how u spelled it.. nd yes gurl keepin dat baby was da best decision nd congrats to u nd ur man. dat baby is goin to grow in a loving family..dat was hott nd yea it def touched me. ma eyes was glued to da poem!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww that's sweet. No matter what love conquers all. Great poem and congradulations. 100/100
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    IM glad you kept the baby i don't believe in abortions!! I love this poem=)

  • 16 years ago

    by shamvi

    I never tot it was really long until after i read it...
    it's from the heart...i love it.,bravo!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ryley B

    I love this one it butyful well as they say after the rian there's always the sunshine

  • 16 years ago

    by Mia

    I mean, THAT was a stroy, and the way it should have been written.
    It makes me happy to think that sometimes a "story" like that has a happy end

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Good work its beautiful my sister just had a baby a month or so ago her name is rayna melody she is so beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    That was some real stuff.
    I dont know how you done it but Thats good you are stayin strong!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah Mirabile

    Wow. I really love this poem. Your so good it scares me. haha. 5/5 AwEsOmE JoB...

  • 16 years ago

    by KATIE

    THAT WAS REAL GOOD!..HANDS DOWN HERE'S A WINNER! LOL
    NAH BUT BEST OF WISHES AND NICE JOB ON YOUR POEM! KEEP YOUR HEAD UP!

    ♥KATIE

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Omg.. i love this. i know the feelin. i went through this. its crazi.. and i id the same, i let her daddy hold her first... great poem i trully love this

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    This poem is sad at first but im glad the way it ended aww!

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Not a breeder is me....nice that YOU as A LADY stood up for what YOU felt was right. So happy for you & yur child

  • 16 years ago

    by Always and Never

    Awww, that was so sweet. I cant have babys, so im glad you kept her... It's unfair that the people that want kids cant have em, so im glad you made your decision. great poem story, and thanks for my comment