Glass Heart

by reJoyce   Dec 25, 2007


I've been lookin for an answer
I've been lookin for a reason
Of why love is so easily lost,

I've been searchin for the passion
That's hidden in the secret
Of what price sustains the cost

I've been dying to find
The meaning of truth
When the facts are so misleading,

I've been down on my knees
Asking God please
Fill this emptiness and give my life meaning

I'm a vase without a flower
I'm a tall but fragile tower
And my foundations are cracked and broken,

I have water to supply and fulfill
But it's lessening faster still
And time is the one valuable token

So I'm waiting for this fog to clear
Confusion and doubt to disappear...

Though waiting is the hardest part
It's worth the while
For my glass heart

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  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Woow the images you give through out the poem are awsome and really touching! 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    This poem is amazing and i trump everyone here. cause i know you!!!muahaha but yes i like this one a lot. if only i could be as good at writing poems as you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Keith

    Well this particular poem is at least very good and well structured, and its always good to experiment and use other language techniques to add effect other then rhyming.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wonderful wonderful job
    you've done here
    so much passion in this poem
    I can easily relate 100%
    This poem kept my intrest from beginning to end
    I loved it
    Your a very good writer
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    The title is very catchy and the content is very great. I really love the way you express your emotion, especially the last stanza. Wonderful write, deserve 5/5 for sure!!

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