Hmm that was great piece much more the title of the poem seems sounds interesting..its kinda has a great expressions of those unclear words and needs to comprehend it. the flow was good even the emotions,, it was nice and i enjoyed it 5/5

I Loved it :)

"I'm a vase without a flower
I'm a tall but fragile tower
And my foundations are cracked and broken,"

i loved that well done, was a great read in all. The flow was good and description was pretty good too full of emotion and just a good rea all together keep it up 5/5

Wow, I really liked this poem, it flowed beautifully and had to keep reading. there is a spelling error on the line;

I've been serachin for the passion

but apart from that, loved it

The title is very catchy and the content is very great. I really love the way you express your emotion, especially the last stanza. Wonderful write, deserve 5/5 for sure!!

Wonderful wonderful job
you've done here
so much passion in this poem
I can easily relate 100%
This poem kept my intrest from beginning to end
I loved it
Your a very good writer
5/5
kaila

Well this particular poem is at least very good and well structured, and its always good to experiment and use other language techniques to add effect other then rhyming.

This poem is amazing and i trump everyone here. cause i know you!!!muahaha but yes i like this one a lot. if only i could be as good at writing poems as you.

Woow the images you give through out the poem are awsome and really touching! 5/5!!