Hey Kayla Baby!!! Nicely Written! I Miss You Hun! Merry Christmas Too!

xxx.

Although this was written for someone else the emotion feels like it is coming from you.Which is a great quality for a writer to hold. The flow was smooth and although the ryhme was a bit off in places the poem was still beautiful.

I think that the last stanza >>
" But I won't take him back,
I refuse to sink that low.
All of those feelings were left behind,
Back two summers ago."

was a great way to end the peice. It summed everything up. Again, a beautifully written peice. Great job!
5.5

Amber :]]

It was adorable but with such a story i think it could be made longer for more details... it's great the way it is but i would have loved to hear more<3