I liked the imagery and the way I could see the whole thing playing out in my head. I had to add this one to my favorites.

Hey i really liked your poem and style of writing, very vivid and memorable, but i also noticed that the name of your poem and line used through out comes from a Fall Out Boy song and i just thought you should give them some credit instead of pretending it is your own original work. other than that it was great though

I loved this poem. i can image the whole thing. reading this made me feel like it was me going through this(mostly cause i have). this poem is now on my favorites list.*Twiggy*

You did an excellent job ont this one. It was flawless and very well written!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid