I love this poem so much.. its so good but yet so sad.. i have done the same thing to the one i love (pushed him away) and now everyday i only hope that he returns...
keep up the good work... 5/5

Aww this is sad. Just stay strong everything happens for a reason
-vino

Sorry if i get annoying but i just have to say once more that this is my absolute favourite poem.. i love it... i show all my friends =] lol.. i printed it out and take it places to show ppl n stuff.. i seriously love this poem... kepp up the amazing work... 11/10 =]

Oh wow....this is good, it ummm stirred somthing up. it was good.

Wow. i had to remember to breathe at the end. amazing.

So much depth

That was a really good poem!
The suspense was driving me crazy =p
Seriously the emotion was so strong and felt through words.
Great Job!

W0W
VERY G O O D.
It's true...

Keep up the good work! =]

5/5

Wow very sad but very very good, your poems are great

Woa major twist at the end, liked it

WoW! This poem was amazing!
I love how at the end you wouldnt expact that..Great Poem!

A wonderful topic to choose and i see that you chose yer words wisely. a lovely piece of work, keep up the wonderful poems!

Nice poem:):):)