by MeltInHisArms Dec 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Pain consumed her as she fell hopelessly down, |
by neo
Beautiful :) |
by Ike Dizzle
Aww this is sooo sad. I hope she is watching down on him and heard what he said. Great poem 5/5 |
by Talieka
I love this poem, it made me feel sad but good because now i am glad that i have said what i wanted to say to the one i truly love.. Even if im not with him now i still feel betta knowing that i have tried and done the rite thing, because who knows what could/could've happened if i didnt... |
I like this! a sense of emotion the can make the reader feel it too! good job and keep it up! |